25.3.14
one on ones and critique
Critique/understand/mock up

my second mock up was critiqued first by fellow students in a formal critique and then by Caroline during one on ones. the feedback I received from students was that my communication symbols/icons were to big and/or to bold and they were to prominent on the page. they also discussed whether my inconsistency in the fonts used for my headings was a let down and I decided that it was something that needed to be addressed. Caroline told me to focus my developments on my type hierarchy, making the headings consistent, the body copy smaller and reducing the size of the communication icons. she also suggested that I experiment with a sans serif font.